I'm bored and I need some inspiration so I'm throwing out a challenge. I want to see 200 words or less, Â on the best moment of your day. Tell it any way you want, first person, third person, from the point of view of a tree, I don't care. Just show me the best moment of your day.
This was the challenge thrown to our writers group, by Sandra Brennan. here is my response, which I dont mind sharing.
Book of MitiI am so excited. After playing my video game, and getting busted by the cops in that one [dont I just love it when I do! ], I ran excitedly to tell my mom about the incident. Oh. Oh. bad logic.... She had that self righteous look. Lecture time. While she ranted in her usual way,something about habit forming and not driving correctly, [NLP whatever that is.. I am getting good at this, pretending to listen and pickin up important words...], I started to think about what to do next. Now for the hard work. "Mom does your hand pain"? NO. Why? I get closer to her, give her
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